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Do not abandon your lovely pet

There is a little boy named Nick. He wants to have a pet very much since his friend bought a dog. On his birthday his mother takes him to a pet store. There are a lot of animals at that pet store, such as dogs, rabbits, and cats. There is a lovely white dog among the animals. When Nick sees it, he says instantly, "That dog is so cute! I want to take it home."
In the beginning, Nick likes his dog very much. He calls the dog Lucky. When Nick gets home after school, he gives Lucky a hug first and then feeds it. He plays ball with Lucky everyday. He even sleeps with Lucky. He always says, "Lucky is my best friend." Lucky Likes Nick, too. Everyday it sits at the door, waiting for Nick.
But when time goes by, Nick's mother gives him a new birthday present -- a newest video game. Nick loves it! He doesn't like Lucky so much like before. When his mother asks him to feed Lucky, "Mom, I'm playing video game. I'll feed Lucky later," he said. When Lucky sits beside him waving its tail, Nick is still playing his video game. He doesn't play games with Lucky anymore.
At last, Nick takes Lucky to a park and never takes it home. He abandons Lucky there. Lucky was once a lovely, clean white dog but now becomes a dirty stray dog. It has to find food in the trash can everyday, otherwise it will starve to death. Poor Lucky. Before we buy a pet, we should make sure that we will take care of them. We shouldn't buy a pet and abandon it when we don't like it. Pets always loves their master, so at the same time, we have responsibility for them. We should love our pets and take good care of them.



Excercise more, healthier and happier

Jane and Mike are brother and sisiter. They both don't like excercise. Jane likes play computer very much. She always sits at the desk and plays computer all day long. When her father asks her to rest, she says"Five more minutes!" But thirty minutes later, she is still sits at the desk. Mike, a thin boy, likes to eat snacks and watch TV. When Jane is playing computer, Mike is sitting at the sofa, watching his favorite cartoon.
Day after day, Jane can't see things clearly. She can only see things in a very close distance, so she wears glasses. At the same time, Mike become very fat. Everytime he climbs the stairs, he feels tired and almost faint. But they still don't do any change. Jane plays computer everyday, and Mike still watch TV everyday after school.
One day, their parents take them to the hospital. The doctor says,"Mike is overweight, and this is very bad to his health.What does he do everyday?" When he knows that Mike watches TV everyday and never do excercise, he is very astonished. The other side, Jane's doctor asks Jane's parents,"Did she follow my advice? I ask her not to play computer so often and she must give her eyes rest." The doctors both think Jane and Mike are very unhealthy. They say,"If Jane and Mike don't change their life style, Mike would be heavier and Jane's sight would be worse."
Jane and Mike's parents now know the situation is very bad. They start to change Jane and Mike's life style. They take Jane and Mike out on weekend. In the beginning, Jane and Mike hates to excercise. But after several times, they feel that they are healthier. Jane doesn't need to wear glasses when she is in the mountain. Mike doesn't feel tired and faint anymore. They all like these changes. Now they go out to exercise almost everyday, such as running, biking, and swimming. They become more and more healthier, and they are happier than before.



Brush your teeth everyday, keeps the decayed tooth away

There is a little boy, his name is Alan. Alan loves to eat desserts. Everyday he eats a lot of desserts, including ice creams, chocolate cakes, and sweet juice. His mother always asks him to brush his teeth,"Alan, if you don't brush your teeth after you eat desserts, your tooth would be decayed," his mother says. However, Alan never listens to his mother. He still eats those desserts everyday and never brush his teeth after he eats them.
One day, Alan is eating his favorite dessert, a piece of chocolate cake. When he put the cake in his mouth, his teeth ached so much that he even can't take another bite of the cake. He feels very sad because he can't eat his favorite desserts. "I want to eat chocolate cake and ice cream," he thought. But he just can't eat any dessert because his teeth ached very much.
Three days later, Alan goes to the dentist, even though he is afraid of the dentist very much. The dentist asks Alan to open his mouth and says,"You have lots of decayed teeth, didn't you brush you teeth?" Alan is very embarassed. The dentist uses some medical equipment to extract Alan's decayed teeth. The sound is very horrible. The dentist also gives him some medicine and ask him to brush his teeth everyday.
After that horrible experience, Alan now brushes his teeth everyday. He also brushes his teeth after he eats desserts. Though Alan still loves to eat desserts, he has beautiful,clean and health teeth now. He goes to the dentist once half year. The dentist praises his teeth and says,"your teeth are very health." Alan now can eat desserts happily, oh, and brush his teeth happily.




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